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**__ Stage 1 __** **__ Brainstorm:  __** **__ Do I want to inform or persuade my audience? __** I want to inform my audience **__ Brainstorm ideas for content: __** Internet Books Organisations Experts Experiences Other **__ Main points I can include in my speech: __** **__Stage 2__** **__ An explanation of what my speech will be about: __** My speech will be about what it is like getting dog and details on the registration, essentials, obedience, walking, toilet training and etc. **__ Tips for writing a good speech: __**  ·  Use words suited to the topic  ·  Words suited tot he audience  ·  Logically sequence body.  ·  Appropriate links between main ideas.  ·  Convincing conclusion.  ·  Introduction grabs the audience.  ·  Include facts.  ·  Language appropriate to the purpose.  ·  Repetition.  ·  Rhetorical questions.  ·  Humour  ·  CHECK MARKING CRITERIA **__ Stage 3 __** Sit…. Stay….. Come….. Good boy! What do you think I’m doing? If you guessed trying to train a dog, you guessed correct. Today, I’m going to talk to you about what it’s like getting a dog. First of all, when I got a dog, we had to register it through the council. We had to pay $250. You have to register a dog because that way they can keep track of stray dogs, so if a loose dog gets found, they can see whether it has an owner, if not, sadly it gets put down. With a dog, you have to buy all the essentials. This includes, a bed for it to sleep in, a brush to groom it, food to keep it’s nutrition up, shampoo to keep it clean, 2 bowls one for water and the other for food, a lead to walk it, a collar to attach the lead and tag to and a tag with the dogs name and owners phone number on it. Seem a lot to you? Sure does to me! A dog at the ages of weeks, weeks and weeks needs to have vaccinations to keep it healthy. You can’t take a dog for a walk before the 3rd vaccination, unless you want your dog to come down with terrible diseases or infections. A dog needs to be de-wormed and de-flea every so often. Around the age of 6months, a dog needs to be de-sexed and micro-chipped. Dogs need to be micro-chipped, so if they run away or get dog napped, the police can track it down. Obedience is a great thing to have in a dog. Commands such as, sit, wait, lay, come, etc. are all things you can teach your dog. When you get a male dog de-sexed, it helps with its temper because it won’t have any hormones any more. A dog NEEDS to be walked 2 to 3 times a day so it doesn’t go obese. When you go for walks, if your dog goes poo, you HAVE to PICK IT UP, otherwise, you’ll find out you have big charges from the council. The council charges because of air pollution and say you’re going for a quiet jog around your streets and suddenly, plop. You have doggy poop all over the bottom of your sneaker. Just what you wanted. Every dog needs to be toilet trained, unless you want to go home and find your dogs pee and poo everywhere, and personally, I don’t think you do. To toilet train a dog, keep it in a certain place, such as the kitchen and every hour take it into the back garden, that way the dog learns, that is where it can do its business. Every time your dog eats, 10 to 15 minutes later, it’ll need to go for a poo, so take it into the garden for a while. The dog will soon learn. Every dog likes to have attention. They’ll do anything for loving owners that like to play and cherish it. Apparently, a dog can sense when something’s wrong. Well, my dog did whine a lot when my dad broke his arm. Hummmm….. Anyway, that brings me to an end. If you follow my information and strategies, you won’t go wrong if you get a dog yourself. **__ Stage 4 __** 3:54  3:45   3:28   **__ Stage 5 __** || || Excelling || Extending || Achieving || Developing || Effective and appropriate, captures audience attention || ||  || 3 || || __ Body language, eye contact, use of cue cards || || || 6 || || __ Expression, pace, projection || || || || 4 || __ Originality, clear message, logical ideas, audience interest || || || 9 || || __ Appropriate language for audience and content || || || 3 || || __ Effective summary, linked to introduction || || || 3 || || __ Close to 3 minutes || || || 3 || || || Good effort Bekki! You chose an interesting topic; something that you were interested in and had just been through. Your speech was informative and funny. You knew your speech and had practiced using your cue cards. You spoke clearly with confidence and made eye contact with the audience. media type="custom" key="1672057"
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 * Doggy Fashion
 * ** What it’s like getting a dog  **
 * Ballet
 * Dance
 * Animal Cruelty
 * Singing
 * Registration
 * Essentials
 * Obedience
 * Walking
 * Toilet training
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